Your question is very significant. Especially to the new members like myself. As time progresses, I find myself editing the text ads provided in the 'Marketing' more and more. Adding that personal touch to the text ads can make all the difference. Even more so when we can shorten the message down to one line or sentence. Your question has encouraged me to do just that.
This is what I have come up with:
"We are looking for motivated individuals with access to the internet to join my home-based, internet sales & marketing team; full training will be given FREE of charge."
I may go on to say, "If this sounds like something you would enjoy doing, apply at: www.sfi4.com/xxxxxxxx"
You are absolutely right in looking for a one-line advertisement in today's fast moving environment; people just don't have the time or patience to read through lengthy ads. By shortening your ad but retaining the key-words, you make it far more effective.
Your question is very significant. Especially to the new members like myself. As time progresses, I find myself editing the text ads provided in the 'Marketing' more and more. Adding that personal touch to the text ads can make all the difference. Even more so when we can shorten the message down to one line or sentence. Your question has encouraged me to do just that.
This is what I have come up with:
"We are looking for motivated individuals with ...more